Running after the rain

The rain has just concluded

late, on a Sunday afternoon

although that may deter others

that is one of my favorite times to run

along the creek by the woods

near my home in Colorado

🌧️

The trail is deserted

the creek overflows onto the path

I breathe in the cool, moist air

it is heavy and invigorating

all at the same time

the dampness that still fills the air 

amplifies the aromas around me

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My nostrils are filled with wild smells

petrichor, the smell of damp earth

wet grass and floral scents

mint, sage, thistles, pine

heady and overwhelming 

in the best possible way

🌧️

The ground beneath my feet is soft

impressions from my shoes are left in soil 

some dips in the dirt path contain puddles

I jump over them

yet my shoes and feet are quickly soaked

I hardly notice

for there are so many other things to observe

🌧️

The birds and rabbits rapidly scatter from the path

startled by the sudden appearance of a human

for how many people haunt the wooded path

immediately after a heavy downpour?

The small animals scurry swiftly back into the brush

that was their refuge during the storm

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Bees and beetles rest on blossoms

waiting for their wings to dry

I alarm some butterflies that were on flowers near the path

they flit away, flying low to the ground

for their wings are still fragile from the rain

🌧️

I run past a small waterfall

the roar of the rushing, overfull banks 

plunging down into the creek 

is music to my ears

it is just me and the sound of the water now

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I keep running and come upon a clearing 

Bushes and trees give way to a meadow

filled with a kaleidoscope of colors

purples, yellows, pinks, and whites

droplet covered blooms each with a unique fragrant scent

🌧️

The cloud cover still present above provides a pleasant shelter

though I should be overheating by now

running on a summer afternoon

I am still surprisingly cool

the shadows the clouds cast lend to the feeling of solitude

it is just me, nature, and the coming darkness

🌧️

Slowly the birds and bugs start to come alive again

I hear the song of robins

and the chirp of crickets

along with the creek

that never stops flowing and gurgling along

sloshing, swishing, and swirling

🌧️

I am at peace

It feels like the run has hardly begun 

but now I am nearly back home

it starts to rain again

I quicken my pace

upon arriving home I finally notice

I am covered in mud

and drenched all the way through

but it was all so lovely

I hardly even noticed

🌧️

Oh to run after a rain

late, on a Sunday afternoon

along a rushing creek,

through a forest and meadow

with only nature as my companion

is one of my favorite things to do.

🌧️🌧️🌧️🌧️🌧️

Just in case you were wondering, no, this is NOT a photo of the creek I run by. Granted, I hate having to be paranoid and I would love to post a photo of the creek this poem refers to, but you never know on the internet who may come across what you post and decide to be a creeper so safety first. Also, I ACTUALLY started writing this poem back in the summer of 2023. Yes, I am THAT slow. But I often like to go through many revisions with my poems and also life happens and somehow YEARS pass on something you meant to finish much sooner.

© Rebekah Krause 2026


Comments

7 responses to “Running after the rain”

  1. Marianne Ayers Avatar
    Marianne Ayers

    Absolutely love the imagery here! I can imagine running past everything you describe. Beautiful work!! And there’s no timeline for writing, I believe. All that matters is that you finished. And I’d say it was definitely worth the wait! 😊

    1. Branwen oShea Avatar
      Branwen oShea

      Incredible description, fully immersive but not overdone so that the mind wanders. That’s a hard balance to find. Lovely!

      1. As one of my favorite authors, this means so much to me to receive such words of praise from you! Thank you! =)

  2. So lovely! I almost want to get out in the rain and run along a creek. Thanks for sharing your experience. By your descriptions I can imagine running through the beauty of nature and enjoying it too.
    It doesn’t matter how long it takes to complete a work of art such as yours.

    1. Awww, thank you. =) I’m so glad I could help you visualize and feel the experience. That was my goal as I was writing it. =)

  3. Veronica Prescott Avatar
    Veronica Prescott

    Beautiful! 🤍 Now I’m wondering if I can get my husband to cut me a trail through the woods to run… I’m also wondering if I should start running..😉

    1. Thank you so much! And I would definitely give trail running a try! =)

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